The most common mistake in most VSL scripts


The #1 Mistake Brands Make When Writing VSLs

Most brands that try to write VSLs or direct response creatives fail before they even get to the offer because they pitch the product too early thinking they need to "capture" viewers/traffic as quickly as possible.

When you name your product in the first 30 seconds, you break the psychological process that makes VSLs so powerful. Instead of feeling like they are watching an interesting story or learning something new, the viewer immediately feels sold to.

That single mistake triggers skepticism, tension, and drop-offs and you lose the one thing that makes VSLs so powerful; hiding the sales process.

A great VSL is not about throwing your product in someone’s face. It is about guiding your prospect through a carefully designed journey. First, you agitate the problem and bring it to life so vividly that it feels urgent and painful.

Then, you educate them by revealing the real root cause of that problem. Finally, you introduce a unique solution mechanism that solves that cause in a new way. Only when the audience is fully convinced of the mechanism do you reveal your product as the logical and easy delivery vehicle.

By this point, they are already sold. Think about how Dr. Gundry’s supplement VSLs work. He spends minutes explaining the science behind lectins, gut bacteria, or mitochondria before mentioning a product. The education builds belief. The belief creates new hope.

And the product reveal becomes a relief, not a pitch. If you want your VSLs to convert, stop pitching in the beginning. Instead, engineer belief first.

Once the prospect believes in the mechanism, buying your product becomes the most natural decision they can make.

Summary: The biggest mistake in VSL writing is pitching too soon. The key to high conversions is delaying the product reveal until the prospect has been fully educated and emotionally invested in the solution mechanism.

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Fernando Oliver

I built and sold 2 ecommerce brands and generated $10million+ in revenue using direct response e-commerce funnels. I make YouTube content and write long-form value emails about copywriting, VSLs, advertorials, and direct response marketing.

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